Today I decided to comment on Mercy's log about touch.
First Greeted my self and wrote about how amazing her layout was.
Then I talked about how she should add more information to her blog post, lastly I asked her question.
I enjoyed going trough Mercy's blog and reading her blog posts.
Kia ora O’Ninesha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve written a really great comment! I like that you start by giving positive feedback to Mercy and then explain what you like about her blog. Your comment was really thoughtful and helpful. Ka pai! It’s also great that you asked a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
I am so happy to see that you have signed up to participate in the Summer Learning Journey! Remember, if you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave a positive, thoughtful or helpful comment you will receive extra points! If you do this, remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form. .
Ngā mihi nui and keep up the excellent work over the summer! You have great writing skills and I’m looking forward to seeing your next post.
Fiona (SLJ).